The troops just speak war! war! war As we run towards them.
We raise our flag with all do respect.
Gun shots bursting in my ear.
Fighting for freedom with a lot of fear .
King George sending more troops and i started to shoot.
I see my brother loose his foot
so i get mad and kill more enemy's after the first war.
Smoke everywhere
bodies on the floor me
and my team has got to rest.
we get hungry since we have no food
so i pull out my tea chest and I laid my musket on the floor.
1 comment:
This is a great start Ramses. I'd like to see you use specific facts from the Revolutionary war other than King George's name. We can also work on reworking the lines so they flow easier.
Excellent start.
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